Read part I here: A smile from the past
Sneha
reached the designated location at around 5:15 and on her way had already
cooked up an excuse for being that bit late in case Madhav questioned her. She
had been to that particular Cafe Coffee Day joint in City Center, Salt Lake quite a few times with her
colleagues in the past three months and knew quite well that it wasn’t the ideal
kind of location for a date, which the proposed meeting seemed to be. She had
decided on a much casual look and was dressed up in a full-sleeved purple T
shirt and a pair of blue jeans. As she was taking the steps towards
the restaurant, she tried hard to remember any Madhav Ranjan she had met in the past.
There was none.
Madhav Ranjan
was seated in the open area of the Cafe Coffee Day joint well before 5 pm. Over
the years he had learnt the value of being on time, in fact before time if
possible and had thus made it into a habit. Madhav was pointing out something
on his phone to his assistant James when he saw a young lady approaching the
table with a puzzled look.
“Hello. You
must be Sneha”, James said as both the men stood up and smiled at her.
“Ah yes. But
Madhav…”, Sneha responded.
“I am James,
Mr.Madhav’s personal assistant. Here’s my boss”,
Sneha looked
at the other man. He appeared to be in his mid-thirties and his face looked
strikingly familiar but she couldn’t remember having met him before at all. “So
there’s going to be a third person carrying out the conversation? Great!”, Sneha
thought and had almost pronounced the last word aloud when Madhav extended his
hand. They shook hands and Madhav signalled James to leave.Sneha saw that before
leaving James took out a stack of small paper chits and put it down on the table
along with a pen. “Oh so that’s how it’s going to be. Pretty cool”, Sneha
thought, quite pleasantly amused at the
idea.
Madhav moved
forward, pulled a chair and gestured Sneha to take a seat. “So Mr. Madhav
Ranjan, what’s your story?”, Sneha started with the one single question that
was hovering her mind for the last six hours. Madhav smiled and pulled out a
folded piece of paper from his coat pocket and gave it to her. Sneha opened it and started
reading.
I know this entire thing must be appearing quite strange to you and I am really sorry for causing you any sort of discomfort…”
Sneha stopped and looked up at Madhav. She could see a faint touch of nervousness on the man’s face and said, “No no, it’s fine. In fact the uniqueness of the occasion has really got me in. Besides, I hope you understand the little bit uneasiness regarding the way the meeting was set up. And yes, you really look familiar. I hope this note of yours explains that part”
Madhav gave
a wide grin and nodded. Sneha smiled back and once again started reading the note.
“….But trust me, you
can’t imagine how happy I am to once again see the person who had left such a
deep impression on my life…”
“Deep
impression? Me?”, Sneha said to Madhav in much amazement. Madhav gave a brief
nod and gestured her to keep reading.Meanwhile, two cups of Cappuccino were ordered.
“… I know you can’t make sense of what I said just now. Let me help you out Sneha. Let me take you 5 years back in Delhi. It was a hot summer morning and we were in the same taxi headed towards Cannaught Place. You got down near Karol Bagh but not before helping me out to make a life-changing decision. I could speak back then and was working on my laptop. Remember anything?”
That was all
he had written in the note but was enough to give Sneha’s memory the required jolt. She could
see the day clearly in her mind. A man dressed in formals was frantically
typing something on his laptop and received calls in between. He looked very
much nervous and was sweating profusely. She had enquired the man if everything
was okay. He looked at her for a while and then turned his laptop to make the
screen face her. “Just look at this. I have designed this web-site for a
company. It was all ready two days back when the idea for a new feature dawned
on me”, the man seemed desperate as he moved his finger over the screen and
clicked on links in between. “See this tab here. If you click on it an entire
new window opens up that gives a virtual tour of the company’s achievements
with an animated mascot guiding the viewers”, the man showed Sneha how it
worked and kept on clicking on tabs and links.
“It looks good.
But why do you look so bothered?”, Sneha had asked the man back then.
“Bothered? I
am scared!! I have worked on this project for months. But now I fear they might
not approve it. I briefed them about the new feature over the phone. But it
seems like they prefer the conventional ways. I know this design is unique and
really want this to be on the site. I am undecided whether to keep it and
present it to them or change the codes again right now”.
Sneha had
replied, “Okay. See, I don’t know much about these technical stuffs. But if you
really believe in your idea then keep faith in yourself. Go ahead with this
design. Take a chance”. The man kept staring blankly at her for some time and
then went back to working. While she was getting off, the man wrote his name
and number on a piece of paper and gave it to her asking her to call her if she
knew of any web-development work. Sneha remembered telling him that she had
left her cell-phone at home.
Now five years
later, that very man was sitting right before her but no longer able to speak.
“Yeah, I do remember it now. So how did you end up losing your voice? And how
was that incident so remarkable for you?”, Sneha still had questions to be
answered. She saw that Madhav was already writing on one of those chits. He
handed over the chit to her in a while. It read:
“Take a chance- those words of yours gave me the much needed impetus. I presented that very design you saw in the car and it was accepted well by the board members. They not only approved the design and paid me handsomely but in fact signed me on for maintenance and support of their site….”
Sneha looked
up at Madhav , gave a warm smile and continued reading.
Sneha had a wide grin on her face when she finished reading the note. “Wow, that’s such a surprise. I don’t know what to say. By the way, how did you get my number?”
Madhav handed her another note.
“Suddenly one day, I saw your face on one of the Facebook friend suggestions. We had a mutual friend, Anjali Thakur. I wrote to her about this entire thing and asked for your number. I got to know that you are in Kolkata at present and so when I had to come here for work I made up my mind to meet you up“
“Well, well
so that’s what this is all about”, Sneha sighed, “I am really glad that you
found me. It feels great to know how the small things that we do in our
day-to-day life might end up leaving an impression on someone’s life. Amazing
indeed”.
Over the next few minutes, Madhav and Sneha shared their life's experiences with each other through notes, hand gestures and a lot of pleasant expressions. Sneha talked and Madhav listened. He passed on notes and she read them.
Over the next few minutes, Madhav and Sneha shared their life's experiences with each other through notes, hand gestures and a lot of pleasant expressions. Sneha talked and Madhav listened. He passed on notes and she read them.
Sneha left
for home at around 8 pm. Madhav had a flight back to Mumbai in an hour. While
parting, they exchanged a promise to remain in touch in the future. “I have
saved your number now Madhav. So no guessing games next time.” Sneha said to
Madhav and they both broke into a laughter. Little did they know that in those moments they were writing the prologue of a lifelong story,the seeds of which were planted in destiny's womb, five years back.
When Sneha
reached her flat, she immediately ran towards her cupboard. “The number”, Sneha
remembered “I did keep all those visiting cards and all in my diary those days”
She found the old diary and looked for the piece of paper Madhav had given her.
She found it in between the pages. Sneha checked the number. It had been the
same all those years.
Just then
her eyes fell on a small cardboard box. The box contained pastel colours.
Sneha noticed that the bottle containing brown colour had turned over and
somehow the colour had leaked, leaving brown-coloured marks on few of the cloths
kept near the box. The colour-box was a gift that her closest friend Sunaina
had given her on the last day of school as Sneha was quite a painter back then and it had the following words written over it, quite ironically:
“For
my best friend Sneha, the most careless girl I have ever known”.
Sneha smiled
instead of freaking out at this revelation. It was the same smile that
was with her ever since she bade Madhav goodbye. The smile now had an added
pleasure of another past remembrance and at the same time, the embarrassment of
realising her fault in shouting at the dhobi in the morning.
Sneha knew that
her smile would last for quite some time now. It was a smile that had flown in from
the past and settled on her lips.
well..the story is great...but expected a better finishing...nice try though :)
ReplyDeleteWell written again but the suspense of part I could have portrayed in a better way.. A sweet short story..I liked the picture.. :)
ReplyDelete@R|B: That's how the story transpired in my mind and it had to be that way. I will appreciate it if you can write down a different ending here in the comments. Anyways thanks :)
ReplyDelete@Ruchira: I tried not to include any melodramatic developments and keep it as realistic as possible. Regarding the picture, I had to search a lot for one nearly suitable image and then tweaked with it to match the story. Thank you :)
Hello Pro.
ReplyDeleteI actually liked this. The reference to FB friends was a nice touch. It was a pleasant trip down memory lane.
I only have one minor suggestion, if I may...maybe put the conversation in a different color. The font you used was a little hard on my eyes. My blog posts have a black background too. If I want something to stand out, I usually use the orange or yellow colors. You could even try red. Have a play with color & see what you think.
Thanks for sharing & visiting. I love hearing from you.
A Woman's Poverty
@Andy: Even I felt so while posting it but couldn't make up my mind. Using different colors would make it look quite tacky. I have changed the font now for Madhav's notes. Thank you so much for your support sir :)
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